another thing i wrote. its kinda old, well a few days, but meh.
'Untitled' Love, like a rose, Has its beauty But also carries its throns. Grip it too tightly, And you'll get hurt. Hold it too loosely, And you'll lose it.
still needs a title and doenst feel complete, but its there for now. feel free to thorw title ideas at it. or if you really want to screw with me manage to get me depressed and i might jsut b able to finish it, at least to a level of completeness that satisfys me.
errr... that bit about depressing me was a joke. but hey if thats what your into.
Could we not just open one 'Writings' thread rather than have all these random threads open? There is one for poetry somewhere called 'thou blind fool......'
It just get's a bit busy in here otherwise!
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