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Ok, these aren't as angry. They are a bit more thoughtful. But the impulse to write them was the same x

DON'T CRY FOR ME

I guess what surprised me most
Was that I didn't cry.
We had done our share of fighting
And I knew why
We had to end it.

We did not shout about it.
There were no lies.
Finally, there was honesty between us.
We did not hide
From the truth that it was over.

It was the right choice.
I have to believe that.
I cannot choose to stop
And regret that we could
Have done things differently.

It is for the best.
I will not cry.

_________

ON FREEDOM

I have thought recently of freedom
Of what freedom means.
I have decided I want none of it.
What is fredom anyway?

It is a nothingness surrounding me.
It is the freedom of a tree uplifted
From the comfort of soil,
A tree fallen, branches faltering.

Or a boat torn from the safety of the dock
Swaying on the waves, heading for the rocks.
Or a man without a home, on the street,
In the deep dark night, alone.

Death too, is a kind of freedom.
But few would welcome its eternity.

I wish to be rooted, tied down, enclosed
In a warm embrace, free to love and
To be loved, and knowing my place
I want the freedom of a lover's arms
The freedom to be seduced by a lover's charms

And if that is not freedom,
Then willingly, I submit to slavery.

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WILLOW TREE

I stood beneath the willow tree
A thousand stars above of me
But all my dreams like trampled leaves
Lay faded at my feet.

I cried beneath the willow tree
And each tear fell into the stream
That flowed like life in front of me
It just kept flowing by.

One day I'll die beneath this tree
And maybe folks will mourn for me
Perhaps a lover will shed a tear
Til then I'll just be waiting here.

_____

MAP

I made a map of Leeds today
So I could remember
Everywhere I left you
So I could retrace the path
We made together.

The room where I met you
The club where I kissed you
The bed where I touched you
The house where I loved you

I rewalked the path we walked
Long ago, trying to remember
When it was I knew I loved you
But as it grew dark

I found the places we argued
The bench where you broke me
The step where you lied
The street where I cried

When I said it was over
I have to remember these places too
So I can remember how it happened
How I came to hate you.

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Originally posted by: lizbian

"
One day I'll die beneath this tree
And maybe folks will mourn for me
Perhaps a lover will shed a tear
Til then I'll just be waiting here.
"


This is my favouritist bit

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Not very angry today, but I am liking them, not that I can really comment. knowing nothgina bout poetry like I do. I like Map, and and On Freedom best.

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